A boy with a hat

[A H M E A D]

 

Welcome my sister
How are you?
I hope you're in good mood
Let's start

I liked the beginning a lot because
it gave a good introduction to the poem
The boy description was perfect

The girl was exploitative

But it seems that the boy was trying to satisfy her
selfishness
The end of the poem were not the beautiful as
the beginning of the poem

I'm sorry
I wished that you're good mood for my opinion
Hahahahaha
I think the boy has served this girl
until the end
Great poem
God bless you my sister



Bye

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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة A H M E A D ; 04-13-2012 الساعة 07:57 PM سبب آخر: اضافة الرد

[Miss CoCo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة A H M E A D Welcome my sister How are you? welcome bro glad to see you I hope you're in good mood Let's start hhhhhh...yes yes the mood is fine I liked the beginning a lot because it gave a good introduction to the poem The boy description was perfect glad to know that ...i thougt that the beginning wasthe weakest part The girl was exploitative why ..the boy do that ..she didn,t force him to But it seems that the boy was trying to satisfy her selfishness The end of the poem were not the beautiful as the beginning of the poem I'm sorry hhhhhh..no need to apologaize .. just wait and see how i, look when some one opposite my opinion..just kidding I wished that you're good mood for my opinion Hahahahaha I think the boy has served this girl until the end Great poem God bless you my sister and you too bro ..you too Bye

see ya