Welcome my sister
How are you?
I hope you're in good mood
Let's start
I liked the beginning a lot because
it gave a good introduction to the poem
The boy description was perfect
The girl was exploitative
But it seems that the boy was trying to satisfy her
selfishness
The end of the poem were not the beautiful as
the beginning of the poem
I'm sorry
I wished that you're good mood for my opinion
Hahahahaha
I think the boy has served this girl
until the end
Great poem
God bless you my sister
Bye
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة A H M E A D ; 04-13-2012 الساعة 07:57 PM
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